Villainous sea witch in the mako mermaids

But this simply fell short of what I was expecting The writing is awkward and stilted Vocabulary shifts from very plain to a random complex word The dialogue is incredible disjointed The random commentary from the narrator is weird and sounds like a sarcastic teenager but supposedly she s an adult The way Arielle s genitals are described sounds like a prepubescent boy who has only read awful fan fiction about women The overall flow is disjointed. The mermaid the witch and the sea book It s clear to me that the author hasn t spent much time reading and researching how to write erotica Kudos to them for publishing but it definitely needs work.

Sea witch in the little mermaid story

Hi I never know what to write in these things but I guess I ll just tell you a bit about myself and a bit about my personal writing ethos I live in Sydney Australia I m a primary school teacher by day but by night I m still a primary school teacher because I have marking But after that and after I feed my two cats and spend some time with my husband I become Rosalie Spencer As a child I fell in love with fantasy Then as a teenager I fell in love with romance Then as a young adult I fell in love with erotic fiction It wasn t too long after that I found my favourite sub genre fantasy reverse harem But it wasn t until I turned thirty that I decided to actually chase this dream of writing what I loved to read I think one o Hi I never know what to write in these things but I guess I ll just tell you a bit about myself and a bit about my personal writing ethos I live in Sydney Australia I m a primary school teacher by day but by night I m still a primary school teacher because I have marking But after that and after I feed my two cats and spend some time with my husband I become Rosalie Spencer As a child I fell in love with fantasy Then as a teenager I fell in love with romance Then as a young adult I fell in love with erotic fiction It wasn t too long after that I found my favourite sub genre fantasy reverse harem But it wasn t until I turned thirty that I decided to actually chase this dream of writing what I loved to read I think one of the reasons it took me so long to do this is because writers groups I ve been in before have turned up their nose at fantasy romance and erotica let alone all those three together I ve been in circles where they aren t seen as real writing even as separate genres let alone together But I want to take you hopefully my reader to the highs and the lows of trying to love and lust after complicated people I want you to feel their struggles with the many people they love the flutter in their bellies when they confess their adoration the weight of their past when it overwhelms them the fire that grips them when they make love I want to write erotic scenes so descriptive it feels like it s happening to you I want to write werewolves and vampires and elves loving with all of their heart even though they re scared I m not sure if I succeed all of the time but that s what I want And really I don t see what s low brow about that. Sea witch in the little mermaid book To chat I can generally be found on Twitter for free short stories check out that corner of my website or the various places I put them up Xo Rosalie site_link As the beloved youngest princess of Atlantis Arielle has everything she could ever need Except the only things she wants adventure and to lose her innocence to the human prince she secretly rescued To get what she wants she needs legs and to get legs she has to risk it all by making a bargain with the most wicked sea witch of them all Ursa Ursa is bored with all the usual deals until something new comes along A princess one Ursa can t resist trapping Finally things are about to get interesting Includes both female mermaid and sea witch tentacles and Please check full list of warnings before reading Sea Witch and the Mermaid FF An Erotic Short Story Raunchy Retellings Had to stop a third of the way through the book. The mermaid the witch and the sea pdf Initially I was really excited to read this I ve always wanted to read a lesbian retelling of Ariel and Ursula especially a spicy version editors and beta readers that won t pull punches Sea Witch and the Mermaid FF An Erotic Short Story Raunchy Retellings