This sexy game threatens to consume me when it ends Can the rules between us confine what might be a forever love Or will two little pink lines entangle us further This fake relationship just got very messy The Bad Boy Billionaire s Surprise BundleShe saw him but she was not sure she wanted to He was now her enemy and her brother friend She gets mistaken for his girlfriend so he offer her money to pretend to be If only she did not need the money he offered but she did How will it all go Can he ever want for for real What if two pinks lines happen What is going to happen See how it all goes 155 I feel bad about this.

Mr Williams Why did this man not want to make a deal with Aaron without Lisa being there I dunno The whole fake girlfriend relationship emerges It made no sense Awkward She s still angry but she let it go for now Aaron had a sex scandal by walking out of a bar with a woman years back and that s why Williams had an issue Whaaat is that about I m confused Lisa gets compensated for her trouble They do get involved And Lisa does what every man seems to do in these book situations She leaves him before he awakens She ignores his calls She ghosts him That was different And she tells him no I like the switch It s him telling her that it s not cool or fair to do that to him This was interesting Stay on that path He fell for her hard The man even looked through her trash to confirm if she was pregnant when a coworker at the bakery.

I never expected my arrogant Billionaire ex crush to make me beg for something real Seeing Aaron my old crush turned enemy looking irresistibly hot at a resort was the last thing I needed When his business partner mistakes me for his girlfriend a risky proposition pretend we re together to seal his big deal As if fake dating your nemesis isn t complicated enough Aaron s also my brother s best friend I should run but with my bakery struggling I cave to the money he offers The we pretend the hotter our chemistry burns I m discovering sides of Aaron I never knew existed Each electrifying kiss sparks a dangerous fire in my heart And every time his hard body presses against mine but on the other hand there are a few things that just didn t sit right with me and 3 wouldn t be fair to the other books I rated similarly Starting with the title Her pregnancy doesn t do anything for the plot and only gets discovered at the end why make it part of the title then Also where is he a bad boy Do I have a different definition of that word And then a couple of small actions and plainly illogical things just to create unnecessary drama delay of the happy ending He goes to her at what she says is the night they do it before talking about their relationship because she talked enoigh for the day The same day she discovers her period is missing And that important talk he wants to have to apologize and tell her he likes loves her gets interrupted by a phone call Why would an art gallery call her at night to tell her she can display her art Doesn t make sense to me and creates unnecessary delay. The pacing was just off in general She is supposed to hate him for what he said all those years ago but where is that hate The last chapters were also felt so rushed with lots of time in between them Like why would he wait days after being interrupted by that gallery calling Just so the end could happening on her gallery opening Come on. Sometimes it s the small things that make or break it And if it s a few small things at once 155 This was a hard story to follow and get into I get what it s suppose to be about but it was a choppy path to build towards that It started out well enough but it lost me a handful of times the longer I read it Then I would go back and read it again thinking I had missed something somewhere I didn t Lisa Carter has had feelings for Aaron Pierce forever He s best friends with her big brother Seth When she was 18 she wanted to have her first kiss with Aaron Aaron didn t want to but then he finally did When Seth almost caught them Aaron made a remark about not wanting her etc etc It hurt her Sure She now resents him and hates him And then we leap forward to 7 then 8 finally settling on 6 years later Lisa is running her Mom s bakery shop which is having big financial issues Plus Lisa doesn t want that career path She wants to be an artist and continue her college education She lies to her Mom about this and her true feelings about the shop Her coworker has been swindling money from her and hasn t been paying a loan to the bank It s a big dumpster fire mess And she never called the cops Not once Why How did this bank know where Kevin put the cash once he withdrew it The bank doesn t have access to what he did with it once he left How do they know he deposited it somewhere else Lisa goes to a resort to find Kevin and runs into wealthy Aaron who s busy trying to make a merge deal with the older owner bold Agatha mentioned it to him Wow The things Agatha said to Lisa after a night with Aaron cracked me up She did not just say that Hahaha How will this end Is Lisa done punishing Aaron Did Kevin get caught I can t spoil it This needs some work some tweaking and it could be cohesive for a reader It s not bad bad But it needs some TLC to make it better These are my thoughts Thank you for an early book via Bookfunnel This is my honest critique of the story 155