Kindle Waifu heroku

TO LEVEL UP HE MUST COLLECT SPELLS AND THE WOMEN THAT GO WITH THEM Titan is pretty sure he s stuck in this year s most popular game The problem is he doesn t remember setting up his character and when he wakes up in chains with a damsel to save he s already at level two With time stopping magic at his disposal Titan frees the so called damsel Zelara a deadly swordswoman with a magical parasite Titan quickly learns that he can use Zelara s parasite to cast spells so if Titan wants to get stronger and discover the secrets of this world he will need partners like Zelara But as Titan collects beautiful women and the spells that come with them he learns that their parasites are fatal To save his partners Titan must fight his way through enemies way above his level Meanwhile a mysterious entity grows in power and it will stop at nothing to keep Titan from learning the truth That he was brought to this world for a reason and it s bigger than he could ever imagine Waifu Hero A LitRPG FantasyThis book isn t bad for a first time author and I took that in account with the 4 star rating They author fell into a few common traps for new haremlit writers. Waifu heroology The MC comes to a strange world with unknown powers and no understanding of what or who he is And by the end of the book he starts to figure it out but this leaves the world building weak He s a decent enough person at least Sadly his powers recharge via intimate events making the relationships shallow. Book Waifu heroku The harem has three full members by the end of this book so the relationship building is poor The harem members at least have distinct personalities and behaviors The intimate scenes aren t bad but some come after a battle where both people are filthy and should smell like death and unwashed bodies ruining the scenes for me. Waifu Hero booking There are the typical missing words misused words and continuity errors that show up in self edited first time author s works Twice the wrong name was used for a character names not even remotely close to the name of any character in the book That was really jarring to read. Book Waifu hero wars The author shows promise and I might read the follow up book They need an editor and some beta readers and to rely less on tropes like sex powers Waifu Hero A LitRPG Fantasy book is written well no typos and stuff like this i don t mind that it is a copy of a game but the main problem for me was the disjointed plot at first chapter you get someone who is a decent player of a game and knows what he is doing then he wakes up a blabbering idiot that survives just by plot armor this seriously disrupts the flow of the book for me and instead of making me curious too what happened just made me not care about the story of a noob learning the ropes again with the help of a over eager goddess i give this 2.5 stars Waifu Hero A LitRPG Fantasy