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Why did Craig Zerf bother putting his name on the front cover if most of it wasn t even written by him I immediately noticed something was off about this book Compared to the first entry in the series the writing is bizarrely repetitive and flowery almost like it s been written by a kid who just found out what a thesaurus is The majority of the descriptions and fight scenes were almost certainly generated using ChatGPT as they feel lifeless and sound literally nothing like the author s usual style Even if book 1 was quite juvenile it was still incredibly fun and most importantly not written using AI The very fast pace at which this series is being released makes it blatantly obvious the author has well and truly stopped caring about the quality of his books Up until now I really did enjoy his work despite its flaws After this I don t think I m going to read any of his newer releases Progression Level upIt s an RPG World 2 Level up It s a LitRPG World is the second book in this series and while this book could use some additional proofreading for the most part it s well done My only beef with this one is the whole discussion on thunder bolts I d not care if the main character wasn t asked by his trainer if he knew what they were but since it was brought up I feel it s necessary to set the record straight on this. Progression of macular degeneration The main character was asked You do know what a thunder bolt is don t you to which he answered of course I do obviously not To be technically correct there is no such thing as a thunderbolt It s lightning that passes through the air which is actually so hot it basically turns the air to plasma but because it s so hot it expands the air in it s path so rapidly that we get the sound of thunder no apologies to Ray Bradburry fans Therefore since thunder is the result of lightning it can t be a thunder bolt that makes the lightning it s actually the other way round. Book progression With that off my chest I will point out there were multiple places in the text in this book where errors occured that should have been caught in proofreading for example when he ran 300 yards in as many seconds That means it took him 5 minutes to run the length of 3 football fields That is not possible since he was supposedly moving faster than an olympic runner Even when I was in sixth grade I ran the 50 yard dash in under 10 seconds which would translate to less than a minute for 300 yards If this guy is moving faster than an olympic runner it would be way less than that for him I realize these are nit picks but again proofreading In another spot there was repeated text Sloppy but not critical. Progression of macular degeneration Despite these irritants the story was still a great story and I m not stopping the reading of this series not by a long shot I d expect most LitRPG fans to enjoy this one Progression Level upIt s an RPG World 2 Diggin this seriesI really enjoyed this The story progression is fun and I like how his disciples give him a hard time constantly Gave it 4 stars because a couple things bugged me Very little character progression A few spells randomly get unlocked and a class change Also a lot of things are explained or skipped over in what came off as a lazy way No technology because it got switched for the medieval equivalent Why though They were supposed to find this amazing lost city to uncover legendary loot and rewards Nope just some rather boring loot that was barely magical Lots of things like this It wasn t enough to ruin the story but enough to take the enjoyment down a notch for me Progression Level upIt s an RPG World 2 Good bookI enjoyed this book and overall the series so far man there are a lot of typos might wanna better editor or proofreader but besides that I like the characters the depth and I love op main characters the story is written out to potentially be a long I hope the author keeps it up I will gladly read and comment Progression Level upIt s an RPG World 2 Very goodThis book was a lot of fun If you liked the first one you ll probably like this one too It is a tad short but that makes it perfect for a quick evening read. Progressive yelp Highly recommended Progression Level upIt s an RPG World 2
Progression (Level upIt's an RPG World #2) By Craig Zerf |
English |
229 |
Kindle Edition |
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